Developing a Compelling Storyline for Your Child's Comic
Creating a Hero's Journey That Resonates
You have a character.
A beautiful, powerful character that represents your child's authentic self.
But a character without a story is like a superhero without a mission—full of potential but lacking purpose.
In this blog post, we're going to create a storyline that gives your child's superhero a journey worth taking.
Not a generic adventure.
Not a story you think they should like.
But a narrative that resonates with their experiences, celebrates their strengths, and speaks to their heart.
This is where Story Love—one of the five Universal Love Languages—comes fully alive.
Why Story Matters (Especially for Nonverbal Autistic Children)
Before we dive into structure and plot, I want you to understand why storytelling is so powerful for nonverbal autistic children.
Stories provide a framework for understanding emotions that might otherwise feel overwhelming or confusing.
When your child sees a character face fear, experience joy, or overcome a challenge, they learn to identify and process those emotions in themselves.
Stories create an emotional distance, making difficult topics safe to explore.
Your child might not be able to talk about feeling misunderstood, but they can watch their superhero face that same challenge and triumph.
Stories offer validation.
When your child sees a character who is like them—who stims, who needs quiet, who communicates differently—and that character is the hero, it sends a powerful message: "You are not broken. You are magnificent."
Stories become a shared language between you and your child.
Even if your child is nonverbal, you can point to moments in the comic, act out scenes together, or simply sit side-by-side experiencing the narrative.
That's the connection.
Real Name: Riley Thompson
Age: 9 years old
Superhero Name: Sage
Superpower: Narrative Weaving
Sage can see and shape the stories that define people's lives.
They carry a magical book that shows three scenes from any
person's hero's journey: their discovery, their challenge, and
their triumph. By helping people see their own story clearly,
Sage empowers them to write their next chapter with confidence.
The Three-Act Structure (Simplified for Parents)
Professional storytellers use something called the "Three-Act Structure."
It sounds complicated, but it's actually straightforward.
Every great story has three parts:
Act 1: The Setup – We meet the hero, learn about their world, and discover the problem they need to solve.
Act 2: The Challenge – The hero faces obstacles, uses their powers, and grows stronger.
Act 3: The Resolution – The hero overcomes the challenge, saves the day, and learns something important.
For your child's comic, we're going to use this structure, but we're going to fill it with elements that are meaningful to your child.
Step 1: Identify the "Problem" Your Child's Superhero Will Solve
Every superhero story needs a problem to solve or a challenge to overcome.
But here's the key: the problem should mirror something your child experiences or understands.
This doesn't mean the problem has to be literal.
You're not creating a documentary.
You're creating a metaphor—a way to explore authentic experiences through the safety of fiction.
Examples of Problems That Resonate:
If your child struggles with sensory overload:
• Story Problem: The world is being overwhelmed by chaos and noise. Only the hero, with their unique sensory abilities, can restore balance and bring calm.
If your child feels misunderstood:
• Story Problem: The hero speaks a different language than everyone else. They must find a way to communicate and show others their true value.
If your child loves patterns and order:
• Story Problem: The world has fallen into disorder. Only the hero, with their power to see and create patterns, can fix what's broken.
If your child has a special interest (trains, dinosaurs, etc.):
• Story Problem: The hero's special knowledge (about trains, dinosaurs, etc.) becomes the key to saving the day when no one else has that expertise.
If your child experiences meltdowns or big emotions:
• Story Problem: The hero must learn to harness their powerful energy (which sometimes feels overwhelming) and use it to protect what they love.
Reflection Exercise:
Think about your child's daily life.
What challenges do they face?
What do they wish the world understood about them?
What would make them feel seen and validated?
Write down 2-3 potential "problems" your child's superhero could solve that would resonate with your child's real experiences.
Step 2: Create the Villain (Or Challenge) That Represents the Problem
In traditional superhero stories, there's often a villain—a bad guy the hero must defeat. But for your child's comic, the "villain" doesn't have to be a person.
It can be a force, a situation, or even an internal struggle.
The key is to make the villain or challenge something your child can relate to without making it scary or traumatic.
Types of Villains/Challenges:
The Misunderstanding Villain – A character who doesn't understand the hero and judges them unfairly. The hero must show them the truth.
The Chaos Force – Not a person, but a force of disorder, noise, or confusion that the hero must calm or organise.
The Isolation Challenge – The hero feels alone and must find their community or prove their worth to others.
The Sensory Monster – A creature made of overwhelming sensory input (too loud, too bright, too chaotic) that the hero must tame.
The Self-Doubt Shadow – An internal challenge where the hero must believe in themselves despite others' doubts.
Example from "Echo" (My Son's Character):
The Villain: "The Noise King"—a character who creates overwhelming, chaotic noise that hurts people and makes it impossible to think or feel calm.
Why This Works: My son experiences the world as overwhelmingly loud.
The Noise King represents that real challenge. But in the story, Echo (my son's superhero) has the power to transform noise into music, chaos into harmony.
He defeats the Noise King not by fighting, but by showing him that sound can be beautiful when it's understood and respected.
The Metaphor: The Noise King isn't a "bad guy"—he's just misunderstood.
He doesn't know how to use sound healthily.
Echo teaches him.
This mirrors my son's experience: the world isn't bad; it's just overwhelming, and he has the power to transform it.
Step 3: Design the Hero's Journey (Your Child's Superhero's Arc)
Now we're going to map out the actual story using the Three-Act Structure.
I'll give you a template, then show you a complete example.
Three-Act Story Template:
ACT 1: THE SETUP (Pages 1-4 of your comic)
• Page 1: Introduce the hero in their everyday life. Show what makes them special.
• Page 2: Reveal the problem or challenge. Something is wrong in the world.
• Page 3: The hero discovers they have a unique power that might be able to help.
• Page 4: The hero decides to take action (even if they're scared or unsure).
ACT 2: THE CHALLENGE (Pages 5-8 of your comic)
• Page 5: The hero faces their first obstacle. It's harder than they thought.
• Page 6: The hero uses their powers, but something goes wrong or there isn't enough.
• Page 7: The hero has a moment of doubt or struggle. They almost give up.
• Page 8: The hero remembers their strength, their purpose, or gets encouragement.
ACT 3: THE RESOLUTION (Pages 9-12 of your comic)
• Page 9: The hero tries again, this time with full confidence in their powers.
• Page 10: The hero overcomes the challenge using their unique abilities.
• Page 11: The world is saved/fixed/healed. The hero is celebrated.
• Page 12: The hero reflects on what they learned. They know who they are.
Complete Example: "Echo and the Noise King"
Let me show you how I used this template to create my son's first comic story.
ACT 1: THE SETUP
• Page 1: Echo is in his room, wearing his headphones, surrounded by musical notes and sound waves. He's peaceful and happy. Caption: "Echo hears the world differently. Where others hear noise, he hears music."
• Page 2: Outside, the city is in chaos. The Noise King is creating overwhelming, painful noise. People are covering their ears, looking distressed. Caption: "But one day, the Noise King came to the city, and his chaos hurt everyone."
•Page 3: Echo hears the painful noise even through his headphones. He sees people suffering. He realises: "I can hear what others can't. Maybe I can help." His hands begin to glow with sound waves.
•Page 4: Echo puts on his superhero suit and headphones. He steps outside. Caption: "Echo decided to face the Noise King, even though he was scared."
ACT 2: THE CHALLENGE
• Page 5: Echo confronts the Noise King. He tries to block the noise with a sound wave shield, but the Noise King is too powerful. Echo is pushed back.
• Page 6: Echo tries to fight noise with noise, creating louder sounds. But this only makes things worse—now there's even more chaos. Echo realises fighting isn't the answer.
• Page 7: Echo sits down, overwhelmed. He thinks, "Maybe I'm not strong enough. Maybe I can't do this." He takes off his headphones, and the noise is unbearable.
• Page 8: But then Echo remembers: "I don't hear noise. I hear music. I don't need to fight the Noise King. I need to teach him." Echo puts his headphones back on and stands up with determination.
ACT 3: THE RESOLUTION
• Page 9: Echo approaches the Noise King calmly. Instead of fighting, he starts to transform the chaotic noise into beautiful music—melody, rhythm, harmony. The Noise King stops, confused.
• Page 10: Echo shows the Noise King that sound can be beautiful. He creates a symphony from the chaos. The Noise King listens, and for the first time, he hears music instead of noise.
• Page 11: The Noise King transforms. He's no longer creating chaos—he's creating music alongside Echo. The city is filled with beautiful sounds. People are smiling, dancing, and celebrating. Caption:
"Echo didn't defeat the Noise King. He taught him. And together, they made the world more beautiful."
• Page 12: Echo is back in his room, headphones on, surrounded by musical notes. But now, he knows something new. Caption: "Echo learned that his power wasn't about being the loudest. It was about helping others hear the music."
Step 4: Add Emotional Beats That Matter to Your Child
A good story has action. A great story has emotion. As you develop your storyline, think about the emotional moments that will resonate with your child.
Key Emotional Beats to Include:
The "I'm Different" Moment – A scene where the hero acknowledges they're different from others. This should be framed positively or neutrally, not as a flaw.
The "I'm Scared But I'll Try" Moment – A scene where the hero feels fear or doubt but chooses courage anyway. This validates that it's okay to be scared.
The "I Belong" Moment – A scene where the hero finds acceptance, community, or recognition. This is profoundly important for children who often feel isolated.
The "My Difference is My Strength" Moment – The climax where the hero realises that the very thing that makes them different is what makes them powerful.
Step 5: Keep It Simple (Especially for Your First Comic)
I know you're excited. I know you have a million ideas. But here's my advice: start with a simple, short story.
Your first comic doesn't need to be 50 pages. It doesn't need complex subplots. It doesn't need multiple villains.
Aim for 8-12 pages. That's enough to tell a complete, satisfying story without overwhelming yourself (or your child).
You can always create sequels. In fact, I encourage it.
Once your child falls in love with their superhero, they'll want more stories.
And you'll have the skills and confidence to create them.
Step 6: Write Your Story Outline
Now it's time to put it all together. Using the Three-Act Structure template, write a simple outline for your child's comic.
For each page, write:
• What happens (the action)
• What the hero feels (the emotion)
• What the reader learns (the message)
You don't need to write full dialogue yet. You don't need to describe every visual detail. Just create a roadmap.
Example Page Outline:
Page 5:
• What happens: Echo confronts the Noise King and tries to block the noise with a sound wave shield.
• What the hero feels: Determined but also overwhelmed by the Noise King's power.
• What the reader learns: Sometimes our first attempt doesn't work, and that's okay.
Do this for all 8-12 pages of your story.
What's Next?
You've just created a storyline that's meaningful, emotionally resonant, and perfectly tailored to your child. You have a hero, a challenge, and a journey.
In the next blog post, we're going to take this outline and turn it into actual comic book pages.
I'll show you how to design layouts, add dialogue, create panels, and bring your story to life visually using the tools we discussed earlier.
But before you move on, I want you to do one thing:
Read your story outline out loud.
Imagine showing this to your child.
Does it feel right?
Does it honour who they are? I
If yes, you're ready.
If not, adjust until it does.
Take the Next Step
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Your child's story matters. And you're the perfect person to tell it.
Stuart McGhie
Father, Love Translator, and Guide for Parents of Nonverbal Autistic Children
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